8/9/2023 0 Comments Stick empires elemental![]() ![]() There are nice descriptions of the setting, and decent smut, though all MC has to do is bare minimum not be a sex offender to have women all wanting him. There are parts where author references people but doesn't explain who they even are, or vaguely after which is confusing, yet gives names to peons dead within a chapter? Descriptions of people are lacking and it leads to confusion overall. let's not attack and overwhelm the noob MC as he stands around being inattentive in a fight,etc) is almost as bad as when the protagonists are dumb for plot tropes. Let's get a fire for trolls that are extra bad for trolls. (Let's stop in an area with creatures in it that would kill us, for 'reasons'. Bad guys being extra dumb for plot purposes. Other tropes that learning too much has ruined for me (you can't draw a sword from a scabbard on your back). Though that's a thing, fencing is a different skill set using a foil vs an arming sword. This Gary Stu that became a self made millionaire while at the same time being a fantasy nerd, so is such a great fencer he won competitions. I mean if the fact he doesn't force himself on the women is one of the only plusses, that's a very sad low bar.Īnother reviewer commented he has whatever skill as needed explained during or after the fact, and they are correct. There's a difference between confidence and arrogant ass, and he falls into the latter it feels. This almost falls into the second, but there's enough plot to totally throw it in that lot. There are stories in this genre that are solid and have smut sprinkled in as needed, and then stories that are smut with a veneer of plot to type the scenes in. I say seem because the nymph thing does point to a use later so not totally useless, but still. ![]() There are sexual situations that seem pointless other than to just have teasing. ![]() Anything that would look like "what could this be?" Is very obvious from jump. It's almost comically good? Let's break things down. ![]()
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